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PODCAST-THE DAY THE VIRGIN MARY APPEARED ON MY CAFETERIA WALL PODCAST-THE DAY THE VIRGIN MARY APPEARED ON MY CAFETERIA WALL Photo Courtesy of Gaetano Cessati 0:00 / 0:00 The Day the Virgin Mary Appeared on My Cafeteria Wall The Day the Virgin Mary Appeared on My Cafeteria Wall was first published in the Blue Ridge […]

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My Writing

FICTION Painting by John Nicolay. IN DARKNESS AS IN LIGHT, Journal of the Blue Ridge, 2022. First Place in Virginia Writer Blue Nib Contest  READ HERE THE DAY THE VIRGIN MARY APPEARED ON MY CAFETERIA WALL, Blue Ridge Anthology, READ HERE HELP, Virginia Writers Project, Summer 2024, Volume 2, Number 2, READ HERE HAZEL MOON

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Developmental Editing

DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING The difference between the right word and almost the right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug. Mark Twain What is Developmental Editing?             My goal is to help my client create a polished manuscript ready to be sent to agents and publishers. I focus

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HOW WATCHING PIXAR, INDIANA JONES & SEINFELD CAN UNSTICK A STUCK STORY

UNSTICKING A STUCK STORY 0:00 / 0:00 Unsticking a Stuck Story An idea for a great character drops into your mind. Then, you compose what you believe to be a magnificent first sentence, “Two hours before Simon’s life took a nightmarish turn for the worse, he stood in his grimy bathroom, under the dim light

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SEARCHING FOR ARTHUR\’S STONE-FICTION IN VQR

SEARCHING FOR ARTHUR’S STONE Photo Credit Simon Godfrey This story was first published in the Virginia Quarterly Review.    Between grief and nothing I will take grief. William Faulkner   Rain splattered against the windshield of the van. The glass fogged. Meg fumbled with buttons on the unfamiliar dashboard, trying to find the defrost. After turning on

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